Unique/Interesting Characters: 2
Entertaining Story/Conflict: 1
Suggestions I have for the improvement for this pilot episode is that they should let the story take its time to show the viewers with good details and ideas on who and what is going on in the story. The story seems to be rushed, so I recommend they slow it down in order to make it look like a more serious problem and not cheesy. The conflict, they can come up with something that can make some sense and not exaggerate.
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